Tell me one thing you love about Agadart. Tell me the one thing she does/says/believes that ALWAYS gets her in trouble. Tell me ONE thing at a time about her. Same with the world. Tell me one characteristic of that world that you really loved creating or exploring and why. Tell me how the characters get around in that world, how or what they eat. Build on one thing then another. I don't know if that helps, but as a reader, those are things I want to know.
Tell me one thing you love about Agadart. Tell me the one thing she does/says/believes that ALWAYS gets her in trouble. Tell me ONE thing at a time about her. Same with the world. Tell me one characteristic of that world that you really loved creating or exploring and why. Tell me how the characters get around in that world, how or what they eat. Build on one thing then another. I don't know if that helps, but as a reader, those are things I want to know.